He is about seven feet tall, with sharp gray eyes that notice every move I make, no hairs
whatsoever except for his eyebrows which were black but very thin, and a scar
that ran from his skinny eyebrow across his eye and then down to his lip. He seems to have a constant
scowl on his face. At least it’s a change from all the fake smiling I've been
seeing. He gestures to the leather chair indicating that I should take a seat.
I slowly cross the room, my eyes never leaving his, and sit. He doesn't speak for a few minutes, just
stares. I start to get uncomfortable and tap my foot. The sound echoes off the
walls and I cringe. Then he starts to talk, “Good evening, Ms. Audra.” His lips
barley move but his voice fills the room. “Hello.” I respond. I can’t
help but stare at his scar and wonder how it came to be. “ You've been quite a
handful Ms. Audra. You do realize that don’t you?” "Yes I do.” “If need be I
will throw you back into the dungeon with your little friend Eric.” “No!” I
yell. He tries to smile but it turns into more of a grimace. I cough and say
softer, “No. If Eric goes down there in his condition he'll die for sure. Please don't.” “And why not?” he demands. “I-I don’t know.” I say looking down.
“That’s what I thought.” I stare at him and know that he would throw me in the
dungeon in a heartbeat. The real question wasn't why; it’s why not? Realizing
this I look at him harder and say, “Why don’t you throw me back in the dungeon?
I’m not going to deny it, I should be down there. But I’m still here with you.
Why?” He leans back in his throne of darkness and sighs. Not a sigh of
meanness, but a sigh of fatigue and misery. I also lean back in my chair and
close my eyes. I think about Eric and how sick he was. He’d never survive if he
came out of the infirmary much less in a dungeon. “You can take me. I’ll go
without a fight. Please. Just don’t take Eric.” I say quietly. “I can’t.” He respondes gruffly. Before I can ask what he means he snaps his
fingers and the guards are there again. They lead me out of the room and I look
back at him. He has his elbows resting on his desk and his head in his hands.
He almost looks like a normal guy who was just under a lot of stress, until he
lifts his head up and stares at me. Behind those cool gray eyes I see pure
hatred. I quickly turn around and start walking faster.
HI, good suspense building and awesome vocabulary! You are doing great, I am so proud of you! Keep up the good work. I don't have any ideas but will think about it. (Jeanne)
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in the beginning of this 'chapter' you said tht the guy had green eyes nd at the end u said tht he had gray eyes...
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